新东方托福高分作文:我居住的城市的优缺点

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Different people are suitable for different city, and different cities have different charm. I live in Shanghai now, I think it's a persperious, busy, developing and colorful city. One of my best friends is planning to move here, I think she will love here. Lily is an extrovert, she is full of energy and curious about everthing,I think living in Shanghai is a good choice for her. Shanghai is one of the most developed cities in China ,it's a shining pearl of estern China and it represent the future of China. Here you can find the high buildings, big supermarkets , famous universities and all the new things you want to get such as the newly published book or newly designed clothes. For Lily, I think what she like most is the competitive atmosphere in Shanghai. You can communicate with extinguished people from all of the world and learn about the latest news, trendency of the field. More importantly, you can get many job opportunities to practice yourself. Shanghai is also a colorful city that combine Chinese culture and western culture. You can find a little Chinese tea house in a narrow street, but you can choose to have a cup of coffee in a supermare before you go to work. But what may make us upset is the heavy traffic and bad quality of the air here. As one of the most developed cities in China, many industries would like to invest here. On the one hand, they bring many opportunities and power for this city, but on the other hand, they do harm to the environment. Shanghai is a competitive city, it attracts so many youths to come here to achieve their goals. For one thing, we can enjoy the feeling striketive, for another, we have to face the high pay of flat.