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字数：300 满分：100分
采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；注意文中出现的部分句子错误；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了。
Mothers is bound to take a long time to dress up. when she prepared to go out, and fathers must urge her to dress up faster. Most men do not like to dress up themselves; even though they have to take a lot of time to waiting for his wife they would never use the time to make themselves look better. On our daily life, we are frequently to hear that woman is asking to someone who around her “how I look?”, while we can be rarely to hear that a man asked the question to people around him. In my opinion, there are three main reasons why women ask the question “how I look”. The first reason might be they grow up with a beautiful doll, and they want to be a pretty lady like a beautiful doll. The second is likely being that woman is always not so confident like most of men, so they constantly pursue to become more beautiful. The third one is that there are some outdate conception thought that women must be pleased men, so they are more like to dress up themselves.
