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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；很好的运用了从句，同时句法错误极少；请注意分段。
On our daily life, we can frequently hear that woman ask to people around her the question “how I look?”. While we can be rarely to hear that a man asked the question to people around him. In my opinion, there are three main reasons why women ask the question “how I look”. The first reason might be they grow up with a beautiful doll, and they want to be a pretty lady like a beautiful doll. The second is likely being that woman is always not so confident like most of men, so they constantly pursue to become more beautiful. The third one is that there are some outdate conception thought that women must be pleased men, so they are more like to dress up themselves.
