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In my opinion, there are three main reasons why women ask the question “how I look”. The first reason might be they grow up with a beautiful doll, and they want to be a pretty lady like a beautiful doll. The second is likely being that woman is always not so confident like most of men, so they constantly pursue to become more beautiful. The third one is that there are some outdate conception thought that women must be pleased men, so they are more like to dress up themselves.