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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33554
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
评语:

学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

The third one is that there is some outdate conception thought that women must be pleased men, so they are more like to dress up themselves.However, why on the earth women and men have so great differences on how they look. As far as I’m concerned, there are many complex psychological and social reasons. Recently, I got an opinion of it from a writer who thought that “Barbie” plays a significant role on this, because most girls grow up playing with a beautiful doll and they grow up wanting to become a lady as beautiful as a Barbie. That is difficult to live up to, but girls tried their best to reach. On the contrary, most of the action figures that boys played with when he was little were hideous-looking. As a result, women and men have different attitude on how they look, and have different ideas about what is beauty. There are many things showing the different degree of how women and men care about their looks. For most women, if they prepared to have a date with someone they would take a whole day long to dress up themselves so that they can show up with a perfect look. Nevertheless, men would never take so many times to make them look better, they generally think that it is a waste of time, only a man who came down with psychosis would do things like this. So, it’s easy to find that every time since prepared to go out mothers are bound to take a long time to dress up, and fathers must urge them to dress up faster. Most men do not like to dress up themselves. Even though they have to take a lot of time to waiting for his wife they would never use the time to make themselves look better.

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