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The third one is that there is some outdate conception thought that women must be pleased men, so they are more like to dress up themselves.However, why on the earth women and men have so great differences on how they look. As far as I’m concerned, there are many complex psychological and social reasons. Recently, I got an opinion of it from a writer who thought that “Barbie” plays a significant role on this, because most girls grow up playing with a beautiful doll and they grow up wanting to become a lady as beautiful as a Barbie. That is difficult to live up to, but girls tried their best to reach. On the contrary, most of the action figures that boys played with when he was little were hideous-looking. As a result, women and men have different attitude on how they look, and have different ideas about what is beauty. There are many things showing the different degree of how women and men care about their looks. For most women, if they prepared to have a date with someone they would take a whole day long to dress up themselves so that they can show up with a perfect look. Nevertheless, men would never take so many times to make them look better, they generally think that it is a waste of time, only a man who came down with psychosis would do things like this. So, it’s easy to find that every time since prepared to go out mothers are bound to take a long time to dress up, and fathers must urge them to dress up faster. Most men do not like to dress up themselves. Even though they have to take a lot of time to waiting for his wife they would never use the time to make themselves look better.