雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

作者词汇表达较多样灵活，也能较准确地使用学术词汇；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

with the fast development of modern lives,science and technology are altering all kinds of aspects of our lives ,such as ,education,travelling,means of traffic,which leads to a huge influence on human beings. Travelling to other countries is also a debating topic in leisure time.As a corn has two sides,that benefits traveling to other nations brings is positive or negative depends on how we react and value. As far as i am concerned, there exists three benefits for people to abroad.First of all,it expands people's horizons .we can experience different cultures and ethnics.The second is it can incentive and improve the relationship among different nations.The last key point is that the phenomeno reflects the world is universal. However,travelling to other countries has negative effect on the domestic country,which minus the consumption and causes the economics development slow down.To the destination,foreigners travelling frequency may lead to erosion the domestic special aspects. In conclusion, it is harsh to judge whether travelling to other countries is positive or not.