复杂句的使用不是很丰富;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累;文章词汇表达不够丰富,在拼写方面也要继续努力;连词使用偏少。
To begin with ,I'm very happy that my foreign friend to coming chain.Secondly ,there are many interesting places in chian.I thank my campous is the most interestingplace. My schools have many beautiful site ,for example, there have very tall library and have various books .In additions,there have beautiful classroom building,have delicate entrance door,have artificial lake. In a ward ,my compous is worthy to seeing.I believe my foreign will be very happy.