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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71619
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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To begin with ,I'm very happy that my foreign friend to coming chain.Secondly ,there are many interesting places in chian.I thank my campous is the most interestingplace. My schools have many beautiful site ,for example, there have very tall library and have various books .In additions,there have beautiful classroom building,have delicate entrance door,have artificial lake. In a ward ,my compous is worthy to seeing.I believe my foreign will be very happy.

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