2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(31):助人为乐

可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用；词汇表达较灵活准确，学术词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

As far as i concern,the society is a big family,so we need to help one anthoer when we are in trouble. one day when i was walking along the street,i found an old woman walking slowly in front of me with a stick in her left hand as well as a bag of fruit in the other hand.she burst into slide and lost her bag.i went to help her to pick up the fruits as soon as i can.she praised me for my help.i said it doesn't matter and it is the spirit i learn from leifeng.although it is a little thing while it make me feel happy for my kind.i decided to help others if they need in the future. nowadays,many people become selfish as they thought it is useless helping others even consider help others will put them into trouble.whatever,i am going to stick to my opinion to help others.