2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown is famous of seafood and kinds of fruit. It s the southest at the china and the weather is warm and confortable in all the season. The wonderful thing is the enviroment is very fresh. most of places are village which around the forest, so you can have some experinces to close the nature if you want to have a rest.