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It is very important to know how to relax ourselves after exam. Some of us prefer to play games at home, some of us would like to travel and to be close to the nature, some of us would like to entertainment, like listening music, seeing movies and some of us like to do exercises.. all these will help us relax after exam. I would like to suggest to travel some place that close to nature, breath the fresh air, get to know different culture after long time studying instead of stay at home. Since the world is colorful, we can learn from travel instead of from book or classroom only.