2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

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As is vividly depicted in the drawing,in front of computers in the narrow spaces,many people are surfing the internet.How impresive the pictur is in describing the people's addition to the internet.The picture seems to be highly self-evident and cause us to be thought -provoking. The picture holds preminent that it is a preversive phenonminer.When it comes to internet,it can not be too estimated.It is the internet that makes the world a globle vilige.However,a growing number of indevedules are becoming more and more addicted in the virtule world.They clouse theirselves in the door and reluctent to connected with others exsept in the virtule world.What's worse,they are indifferent to their firends,family,as well as relatives. This phenonminer is harmfull to us.With our pressure being more and more large in the daily life,we should learn to relieve it.Some meaningfull activities can be orgenised to communicate with each other.As a consequence,internet can be more and more benifit to us.