3.give your point of view
大体意思:
网络的近与远 一/客观描述图:很多人在上网 二/说明意思:网络的普及是拉近了人们的距离还是使人们越来越疏远?
作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文章较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇,有较多拼写错误请认真检查;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
As is vividly dipicted in the drawing,in front of computers and in the narrow spaces,a large number of people are exchangeing their views by surfing the internet.How impressive the picture is in descrebing the people's addiction to the internet.The auther's intention seems to be highly self-evident and the meaning causes us to be thought-provoking. It holds apparent that the drawing is in dicative of a prevasive problem with regard to internet.When it comes to the internet,it's great impacts and benifits can not be too estimited.It is the internet that makes our big world a global village.However,as a growing number of indevaduals are addicted in the internet,they are indulged in the virtual world and forget doing other important work.As a consequense, they close their doors and never go out as soon as they return home after work,and reluctant to have any face-to-face connection with others except on line.what's worse,they become indifferent to their friends,neighborhoods,as well as their relatives. The phenomenon is harm-full to us and our community too.It's time to take meassures to solve the problem.As the pressuer in work and life incresese,we should learn to relieve it.folks can be orgenised together to develop some hobbies which makes one's life increasingly meaningfull and worthfull.Consequently,we must take full use of internet to do everything benificial to make our daily life both joyfull and meaningfull.