3.give your point of view
大体意思:
网络的近与远 一/客观描述图:很多人在上网 二/说明意思:网络的普及是拉近了人们的距离还是使人们越来越疏远?
文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文章层次较为清晰。
As is vividly depicted in the drawing,in front of computers and in the narrow spaces,a large number of people are exchanging their views with others by surfing the internet.How impressive the picture is in describing the people's addiction to the internet.The drawer's intention seems to be highly self-evident and the meaning causes us to be thought-provoking. It holds apparent that the drawing is indicative of a pervasive problem with regard to internet.When it comes to the internet,its great impacts and benefits can not be too estimated.It is the internet that makes our big world a global village.However,as a growing number of individuals are addicted to the internet,they are indulged in the virtual world and forget doing other important work.As a consequence, they close their doors and never go out as soon as they return home after work,and reluctant to have any face-to-face connection with others except on line.What's worse,they become indifferent to their friends,neighborhoods,as well as their relatives. The phenomenon is harm-full to us and our community too.It's time to take measures to solve the problem.As the pressure in work and life increases,we should learn to relieve it.Folks can be organised together to develop some hobbies which makes one's life increasingly meaning-full and worth-full.Consequently,we must take full use of the internet to do everything beneficial to make our daily life both joy-full and meaning-full.