3.give your point of view
大体意思:
网络的近与远 一/客观描述图:很多人在上网 二/说明意思:网络的普及是拉近了人们的距离还是使人们越来越疏远?
能较准确地使用学术词汇,词汇运用灵活;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
As is vividly depicted in the drawing,in front of computers and in the narrow spaces,several numbers of people are exchanging their views with each other by surfing the internet.How impressive the picture is in depicting the addiction to the internet.The drawer's intention seems to be highly self-evidence and the meaning cause us to be thought-provoking. It holds apparently that the picture is indicative in the pervasive phenomenon.When it comes to the internet,its great impacts and benefits can not be too estimated.It is the internet that makes our world a global village.However,a growing number of folks are addicted in the internet so that they forger to do important work and in inddulged in the virtual world.As a consequence,they close their doors return home after work and reluctant to have any face-to-face connection with others except on line.What's worse,they are indifferent to their friends,neighborhoods,as well as relatives. This phenomenon is harm-ful to us and our community too.It's high time that we took masures to develop it.As the pressure in life and work increases large,we should learn to relieve it as much as we can.People can be organised to share their hobbies so that they can communicate with others.Consequently,we must take full use of the internet to make our daily life increasingly joy-full and meaning-full.