2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇积累做的也很棒；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

As is vividly depicted in the drawing,in front of computers and in the narrow spaces,several numbers of people are exchanging their views with each other by surfing the internet.How impressive the picture is in describing the people's addiction to the internet.The drawer's intention seems to be highly self-evidence and the meaning causes us to be thought-provoking. It holds apparently that the picture is indicative of the pervasive phenomenon with regard to the internet.When it comes to the internet,its great impacts and benefits can not be too estimated.It is the internet that makes our world a global village.However,a growing number of folks are addicted to the internet so as to they forger to do important work and in indulged in the virtual world.As a consequence,they close their doors return home after work and reluctant to have any face-to-face connection with other folks except on line.What's worse,they are indifferent to their friends,neighborhoods,as well as relatives. This phenomenon is harm-ful to us and our community too.It's high time that we took measures to develop it.As the pressure in life and work increases large,we should learn to relieve it as much as we can.People can be organised to share their hobbies so that they can communicate with others.Consequently,we must take full use of the internet to make our daily life increasingly joy-full and meaning-full.