高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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my hometown is where i had grew up.it bring the deep memories of my childhood to my mind ,but misfortune,it turns badly and badly .many tall buildings and huge markets were built,it seems that all people has their own car for the traffic is too heavy.I see,our town have to deverop,but it can not be the reason for environments's problem,trees become less and less ,fishes can't be see as usual,this situation hurts my mind,i still can remenbor that there was a time when a deep blue sky ,a lots of tall green trees around the town,many fishes lives in the clear river freely,the roads were no so wide but clear,every person works hard athought they can't made large money ,life is poor but happy...i really hope that there is one day ,i can see my beautiful hometown again,it can't be just in the pass memorise