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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8979
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分65.0分
评语:

作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查;可以适当增加副词的使用。

用户练习作文:

It is unwise to judge a person by their appearance Nowdays, it is normal that the folks like to judge a person by their apearance.In Chinese culture,it have an old saying"the personality formed by appearance".So the everyone is used to judging a person from the first sight.Even the company have the rules about the candidates appearance in their recuitment. Nevertheless,the fact that the appearance can present nothing is konwed.Like the movie star,which acted a bad person,is deemed as a evil.We konw that the actor needed in movies,but in real life the actor not a bad person.Some good actor donate their money for many poor,which act the bad person.In another way, some actor who act the hero in the movie,however,they have bad fame in real life. It is unwise to judge a person by their appearance.We need to learn that we should judge a person by what they did rather than what they like.

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