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As the proverb goes,you should think before you leap.Living in the information age full of changes,we should definitely not jump to conclusions upon seeing or hearing something.Confronted with various kinds of information,modern people tend to trust whatever they have heard or read.However,we should know that information cannot be trusted until it is checked. It is evident that some information is so misleading that we should not believe it.For instance,several years ago,due to the nuclear leakage in Japan,a host of Chinese,especially middle-aged people and the seniors,rushed to buy salt,firmly believing that iodized salt could prevent rediation,which was redicunlous. In conclusion,it is imperative for people to form the correct attitudes towards the informationthey see or hear.People should be educated to raisetheir awareness of judging right form wrong.I firmly believe a better future is awaiting us if we make every decision upon considerable thinking.
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