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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第34篇:一个成功的人最重要的品质是什么

发布时间:2013-08-14 17:05浏览次数:5601
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In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example, honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor?) that a person can have to be successful in life?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

一个成功的人最重要的品质是什么?给出原因并举例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

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If a person want to become successful in the short life with the span of several decades, some characteristics are necessary to be owned.For instance,a successful man should have the subtle insight to figure out the traces of significant opportunities,and of course,the power of imagination also gives us the access to reach our desirable destination.Other previous qualities such as intelligence,sense of humor and so forth are beneficial to us let along. However,I think the honesty is the most important factor amongst all the characteristics. Admittedly,there are only a few people arriving at their life goals ultimately without the help of a group,as a matter of fact,cooperation is a vital point to help you surpass average people and make a substantial progress.And as we know,honesty can tense relationships you have like the effective glue. In addition,other characteristics all base on the honesty whatever it is.A man may be smarter than anyone else,but he would meet with failures eventually because he is untrustworthy.

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