2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I always think if someone whoever intends to pay a visit to China,Beijing is best worth visiting. Beijing,the capital of China,is an age-old history city.There are too many places of historic interest like Tian'an men square,the Summer Palace and the Great Wall. Tian'an men square is a sign of Beijing.Persons whoever go to Beijing the first place he will go is Tian'an men square.Behind Tian'anmen square is the Palace museum which is the grandest museum in China.You can see many meaningful antiques in the museum. Besides,Beijing is also a place where you can experience a different China. Some people assume that the environment in Beijing is terrified.But I want to tell you that over the years, in our common efforts the environment has become better and it will be much better in future. Welcome to Beijing and you will not regret.