牛津英语八年级第四单元测试考试作文及范文

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Last weekend,I go to Beijing Wild Animal Park in order to see aninmals.This trip left me with a deep imperssion.However,I saw a lot of bad phenomeon. First of all,It's common to see tourists feeding monkeys and playing with the tigers.In addition,a large number of people left rubbish everywhere, From my point to this,