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作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Nowdays with the remarkable improvement of people's living standard.We all have some spare money, but how to use it correctly is a heated debate.Some people said:only buy some cheap things is not a good idea.Sometimes it has bad quility, but some other's people have different views .They think it is a great choice in our life. As for me ,I agree to the latter idea because its advantages outweigh its disadvantages.the are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all we collect all kinds of coupons,because we think we could use it later and that time we will save some money .we had done some better plan for our future. The second reason is that we are trying our best to save money even buy some cheap things,because we think not all cheap things is bad. Therefore,as a university study,I think we could do that try our best to save money even by some cheap things.
