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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:诚实

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:25浏览次数:3383[网页划词已开启]
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题目要求:

围绕诚实写一篇小作文。

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200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分66.5分
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作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;学术词汇使用贫乏,注意一下个别拼写错误。

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HONEST When I were a little girl, I was told that Honest is a kind of quaility I must have. And if I did something wrong, I should told my parents instead of lying to them. In that situation they wouldn't punish me and also would help me solve the problem. If they found me lied to them, they would hit my hand by a iron ruler and punish me by keenling one hours. I was really confused at that time ,why did my parents put honest in such a important position? Now, I'm a 22 years old girl, I still don't understand. But living in a whole new city and studying in the university without my family and all the person I can trust, I start to realize even some word sounds beautiful, I just can't believe them. Like roses, they are beautiful, but they are still have thorns. In the reality, we can only trust very close friends that they will tell us the truth. Even some time we have to say a white lie to avoid hurting someone, that is just because we think may be this is the better way. Some words may be hurt, but they are honest. I think, if there is a choice weather you want live in the honest world or not, most people will still choose the honest one, because it's ture.

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