2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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Dear john, i am very happy that you are going to visit my hometown. i think it will be a great memory of your life . i would like to take you to visit the CIF park, which is famous in my hometown.There will be a lot of seafood to have in the park because a big lake exist there. i am looking forward to seeing you soon Yours truly Elias