2013考研英语二图表作文预测:中国城市事故

作者学术词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇丰富度要加强；作者在句法层面做的很棒；全文结构较为严谨。

From what is detailedly demonstrated in the above table chart,we can observe distinctly that in a Chinese city,608 accidents in 2005 are caused by drivers turning left without due care,ranking first,and it increased by 10% over 2004.The number of accidents caused by drivers driving under the influence of alcohol is 281,and it increased rapidly by 15%. The statistics displays the phenomenon that accidents are primarily caused by drivers turning left without due care and by drivers driving under the influence of alcohol is soaring dramatically.What reasons do exactly contribute to this phenomenon?On the basis of my judgment,one significant factor can be available.Most of the drivers who turning left without due care have not the consciousness of driving security.In terms of the causing of alcohol,the reason why people often drive after drinking is that laws and regulations might not have been strickly enforced to warn people not to do it. Given most of the drivers are lacking of legal awareness,It is necessary that authorities should make rigid provisions and that legislators shoud formulate rigorous laws.