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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13034
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分62.5分
评语:

若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮;请注意积累词汇量,拼写错误比较多;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

As we know, communication is viral of our lives as water for the fish. First of all, to talk with others is basic in our lives. If we wouldn't know how to communite with others, we can't get necessary information we need.Especially, If teachers don't know how to talk with their students, their could't know their real situations.If the parents have not control of communicating with their children, their would't understand the children real need. Consequence, it is communication that have a great role in our lifes.

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