2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

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As we know, communication is viral of our lives as water for the fish. First of all, to talk with others is basic skill in our live. If we wouldn't know how to communite with others, we can't get essential information we need.Especially, If teachers don't know how to talk with their students, them could't know their real situations.If the parents have not control of communicating with their children, them would't understand the children real need. Consequence, it is communication that have a great role in our lifes.