2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；请注意分段。

If a foreign friend of me is going to visit my hometown ,I would like to take him to LongShan,a mountain in the countryside ,which is the simple in my hometown.The mountain is low,but very beautiful.There is fill with lots of belief in the mountain,because people come to here to memory a great person who called HuiNeng.He had made a great contribution in China ,even in Asian.