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it is not brallient to make decitions at once person look or heard something the first time. there is an old said that it might be not true about what you see, so people must learn all aspcects of things, no metter person or case, before they derived the results. a lot of cases can explain this view. such as the famous accidence of Titanic, before the solider acknowlliged there is a smarll ice mountain in front of their ship, they do not keep it in their mind, and jok with each other as nomor. as everyone know that under the sea covered a huge body of the ice mountain which about five times of the part upon. that is why i let my opinion tend to make a fully understand when you decide to make conclusion, in case occoure mistake beacuse of misunderstanding the person or things that selected.
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