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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40889
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;句式变化多样;作者能较熟练地使用多样的词汇表达,但请注意单词拼写的检查。

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it is not brallient to make decitions at once person look or heard something the first time. there is an old said that it might be not true about what you see, so people must learn all aspcects of things, no metter person or case, before they derived the results. a lot of cases can explain this view. such as the famous accidence of Titanic, before the solider acknowlliged there is a smarll ice mountain in front of their ship, they do not keep it in their mind, and jok with each other as nomor. as everyone know that under the sea covered a huge body of the ice mountain which about five times of the part upon. that is why i let my opinion tend to make a fully understand when you decide to make conclusion, in case occoure mistake beacuse of misunderstanding the person or things that selected.

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