2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；词汇表达较丰富，学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，文中有些单词拼错了。

It is not brilliant to make decisions at once look or heard something the first time. There is an old word that it might be not true about what you see, so people must learn all aspcects of things, no matter person or case, before they derived the results. A lot of cases can explain this view. such as the famous event of Titanic, before the solider acknowleged a smarll ice mountain in front of their ship, they do not keep it in their mind, and joke with each other as normal. As everyone knows that under the sea covered a huge body of the ice mountain which about five times of the part upon. That is why I let my opinions tend to make a conprehensive understanding when you decide to make conclusion, in case to occur mistake because of misunderstanding the person or things that selected.