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It is not brilliant to make decisions at once look or heard something the first time. There is an old word that it might be not true about what you see, so people must learn all aspects of things, no matter person or case, before they derived the results. A lot of cases can explain this view. Such as the famous event of Titanic, before the solider acknowledged a small ice mountain in front of their ship, they do not keep it in their mind, and joke with each other as normal. As everyone knows that there is a huge body of the ice mountain under the sea which about five times of the part upon. That is why I let my opinions tend to make a conprehensive understanding when you decide to make conclusion, in case to lead mistake because of misunderstanding the person or things that selected.
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