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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40889
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;可增加从句和复杂句的使用;文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇。

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It is not brilliant to make decisions at once look or heard something the first time. There is an old word that it might be not true about what you see, so people must learn all aspects of things, no matter person or case, before they derived the results. A lot of cases can explain this view. Such as the famous event of Titanic, before the solider acknowledged a small ice mountain in front of their ship, they do not keep it in their mind, and joke with each other as normal. As everyone knows that there is a huge body of the ice mountain under the sea which about five times of the part upon. That is why I let my opinions tend to make a conprehensive understanding when you decide to make conclusion, in case to lead mistake because of misunderstanding the person or things that selected.

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