the botanical garden植物园
【高频词句】
assemble集合
enter name报名
left baggage office行李寄存处
1.According to the schedule,the touring will include…根据计划安排,旅行路线是…
2.Please be on time.请务必准时。
3.You call leave your baggage in the left.可将行李放在寄存处。
句式灵活多变,再加强从句的使用会更棒;文中词汇表达丰富度不足,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
notice Autumn outing An autumn outing is organized for freshmen, which takes place on 27th, Dec. In the morning, we will visit the botanic garder and see the art gallery Participants: freshmen Schedue: Morning: visit botanic garden and the gallery afternoon: summer palace Time and Place to gather: 7:00 am, 27th, Dec., the school entrance Attention: Prepare your lunch register before this Thursday at the students union