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Dear John: I'm LiHua .I'm heard about you have a dinner and you invitered me to you home go on with your family.I'm more than happy that you would invitered me.But I'm sorry that I'm not come with you .Because I have a very important examination to drawed up the day after tomorrow.I am very grateful to you for the invitation.At last,I hope you have a wonderful time .I also wish I have a chance that I can have a dinner with you next time. Your good friend LiHua