2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

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As is vividly depicted in the drawing,in front of computer in the narrow spaces,lots of people are exchanging their views with each other using computers.How impressive the picture is in describing the addiction in the computer.the drawer seems to be self-evident and the meaning causes us to be thought-provoking. It is apparently that the picture reveal a pervasive phenomenon in regard to the computer.When it comes to the computer,it can not be too estimated with no daubt.It is the computer that makes our world a gelobal village.However,a number of person are addicted in the computer so as to foget to do many improtant work and indulged in the virtul world, which lead to numbers of treagerdies.As a consequence,they close themselves in doors as soon as return hom after work,with reluctanting to have any face-to-face connection to other people.What's worse,they are indifferent to their friends,neiborhoods as well as relatives gredually. This phenomenon is harm-full to us and our community.It is high time to took mesures to rescue the indulged folks,especially teenagers and young people.First,people can be organised together to share their hobbies and facilitate their communication.Second,we should make full use of computer to do every thing which is benifit to us.Consequently,we should adobt its good points and avoid its shortcomings.