2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇积累做的也很棒；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

As is vividly depicted in the drawing,in front of computers in the narrow spaces,lots of people are exchanging their views with each other using computers.How impressive the picture is in describing the people's addiction to the internet.The drawer seems to be self-evident and the meaning causes us to be thought-provoking. It is apparent that the picture reveal a pervasive phenomenon in regard to the computer.When it comes to the computer,it can not be too estimated with no doubt.It is the computer that makes our world a global village.However,a number of persons are addicted to the internet so as to forget to do many important work and indulged in the virtual world, which lead to numbers of treagerdies.As a consequence,they close themselves in doors as soon as return hom from work,and reluctant to have any face-to-face connection to other people.What's worse,they are indifferent to their friends,neighborhoods as well as relatives gradually. This phenomenon is harm-full to us and our community.It is high time that took measures to rescue the indulged folks,especially teenagers and young people.First,people can be organised together to share their hobbies and facilitate their communication.Second,we should make full use of computer to do every thing which is benefit to us.Consequently,we should adopt its good points and avoid its shortcomings.