语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;文中用词稍显贫乏,在词汇拼写也要再接再厉;请注意分段。
As we all know that there are so many humours in our daily life, it is not a good choice to make a conclusion when we see songthing or hear something, but considering twice is a best choce, so that we can avoid the mistakes we usually do. Whatever happens in our life, we would better think twice before we make a decision. So we will form a habit of considering.
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