希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是学术词汇的积累;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Ladies and gentlemen.Welcome to our city. I'd like to tell you something about our city. Nanjing, the capital of Jiangsu Province, lies in the southeast of China. It has a population of about 5 million. The city has a history of more than 2,400 years, and was once the capitals of ten dynasties. It is a very beautiful city with a lot of places of interest, such as the Xuanwu Lake, the Jiming Temple and the Stone City. It also has many modern factories and high buildings. Thank you.
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