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题目要求：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.题目分析：
不能同意这个观点。Never是绝对修饰词。确实，很多的时候独自做出的决定是错误的。因为做出正确的决定需要完整的信息。然而，也有些时候必须独自做出决定。比如，战场上的指挥官。并且，很多独自做出的决定并不是错误的。所以，只能说one can not be more careful to make an important decision。文章用词灵活多样，学术词汇使用也比较准确；作者句法知识掌握的错误，可适当增加从句的使用；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
Everyone is an absolutely independent individual,however does it mean that everbody have the ability to determine their future solely without anyone else?I am afraid that I cannot agree with this idea for the limited cognitive power human own to the world. In accordance with the modern philosophy which derives from France,human loss the chance to acquire information from all the corner of the world in the same time due to the finite ability,and of course fail to grasp the essence of objects because humanity is a kind of subjective creature.As a result,the truth people grasp is not more than the illusion which people want to believe.Understanding this,we can figure it out definitely that any single person can never make a correct decision of significant problems. A man should never make an important decision alone,he or she nonetheless have to do so at times.For example,during a furious battle,the instructor of one part of the military forces is required to react to the variable conditions briskly and lead his soldiers to resist the enemy.
