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文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活，希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇有效的运用了一些复杂句；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；可以适当增加副词的使用。
My dream Everyone may have his own dream. Someone may want to be rich, someone may want to be beautiful, and someone may want to have power. Last Monday, we had a warm discussion about this topic at the class meeting. Here are different opinions. Tom is our class monitor who dreams to be a world famous basketball athlete, he wish in the future, all our people can have health and safe food, like health exercise and have good healthy. Kate's dream is to live in a world with good environment, no pollution where Mary want to travel to Hang kong by flight for she think that Hong kang is the famous shopping heaven. Mike's dream is to be able to study English and Geography with funny by having enough time play the online education games... My dream is to be able to travel all around the world to broad my mind and understand different cultures, and also student can select what they like to study instead of to study only for finding a job. When thinking of these things, we realize that we are full of life and hope.
