小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My good firend is Evilc.I Meeting her before 5 years ago.In that time,she's my deskmate,and we play very well together. Evilc liking shoping,she usually go shoping with me. She likes eating,specially the spicy food. she is my best friend, I like her very much. I wish our friendship keep forever.