2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

词汇表达不够丰富，要增加学术词汇的使用；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词；连词使用偏少。

How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? Now the society, many guardians excessively spoils the child, has taken care of everything all for the child. For the sake of the children's independent, parents should let their own fly, let go of the hands to create their own piece of the sky. Parents should let their children understand that in the real world no matter what have to rely on our own efforts to achieve their ideal. As the rates after we should understand the importance of independence, more should understand parents' heart