如果增加些复杂句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;请注意分段。
It is elligent whatever you see or listen. The reasons are following. First of all, there is a saying words "What you see in your first eyes doesn't have to be truth." I think that means everyone knows. Such like magic, when you see it first, you will be be believe it is true.But not, it is lying. Secondly, people have head, whenever they passed their husbands broken up with them, they would believe everything that they saw.
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