小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；语言不流畅；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Baby, homework finished? Hurry up and finish sleep. The bed. The wake up. Rest for a while. Feel uncomfortable?Baby, homework finished? Hurry up and finish sleep. The bed. The wake up. Rest for a while. Feel uncomfortable?Baby, homework finished? Hurry up and finish sleep. The bed. The wake up. Rest for a while. Feel uncomfortable?