一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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Last sunday, Mr.Lee got up intensely early to go fishing. He spent the whole day sitting beside the river but got nothing at the of the day. Therefore, Mr.Lee was very disappointed due to the fact that he had to go home by dinner time. On his way home, Lee thought that his wife might be mad at him for bringing nothing back. So he bought a big fish at the market before he got home. At least, he was happy finally for what he could bring home.