小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；层次不够清晰，文中很少使用衔接词；连词使用偏少。

I have a good friend. she is a beautiful girl. she has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. her voice is better. she is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. she is also nice. she often helps us . our classmates like her very much. I have a good friend. She is a beautiful girl. She has long black hair ,two big black eyes and a red mouth. Her voice is better. She is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books,playing computer games and chess.She is also nice.She often helps us. Our classmates like her very much.