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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4567
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
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作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;全文结构较为严谨;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。

用户练习作文:

As for as we can see, the Internet has become a part of our daily life these days. A number of people use the computer to communicate and to keep touch with their friends. Of course, it exists some advantages and disadvantages, we can include them in the following reasons. There is no doubt that the Internet can enhance the communication of people.And with the development of the society, it appears all different kinds of communication tools, such as QQ, Weibo and Skype. If you haven't meet your friends for a long time, you can see each other through QQ . It's convenient for you to contact your friends again. However, there are some disadvantages for people to contact with the Interent. For one reason, it's dangerous because person private and basic information will be stealed easily by someone. Second, your eyes will hurt if you speed a lot of time on the Internet. In my opinion,everything has it two coins. But if we use it properly, the advantages are piror to disadvantage.

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