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As for as we can see, the Internet has become a part of our daily life these days. A number of people use the computer to communicate and to keep touch with their friends. Of course, it exists some advantages and disadvantages, we can include them in the following reasons. There is no doubt that the Internet can enhance the communication of people.And with the development of the society, it appears all different kinds of communication tools, such as QQ, Weibo and Skype. If you haven't meet your friends for a long time, you can see each other through QQ . It's convenient for you to contact your friends again. However, there are some disadvantages for people to contact with the Interent. For one reason, it's dangerous because person private and basic information will be stealed easily by someone. Second, your eyes will hurt if you speed a lot of time on the Internet. In my opinion,everything has it two coins. But if we use it properly, the advantages are piror to disadvantage.
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