高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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i tell you have a things, it is about my very love idol. when i wantch tv was find him, he is very handsome.on the one hand, he has many skill ,on the other hand, he is good boy. i want meeting he in china, so it is a dream. when i listening to he song ,was i could miss my love idol.