2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Now , let me introduce a interesting place where is ZhangJian,it other is THE SEA CITY. IF you visit ZhangJian,you can't miss the thing that sea food ,beach and PIAOSHI.ZhangJian is the sourth of China ,it closes The Sourth Of Sea.When you arrive here,the deep blue seawater display of you, then greating a proun feel in you heart.