高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；如果增加些复杂句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

My favorite sport Pople do sports to make them stronger, but what is the point?Having something you like,i mean sports,is more than your mother make you do it. I like volley ball,i got a volley ball for my seventh birthday.It means i have to do sports.First i didn't want to do it,then i found it fun.It is good for you that is what really matters.I was seven,but i quickly found something that i like. I play volley ball with my best friend Vicky,she is good at that.So I study more form her,she always taught me how to play with it. So what is your favorite sport?