作者学术词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;文章结构清晰,有效地采用了多种衔接方法;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色。
As is shown in the picture,when the teacher teach her student the multiplication,the students express their doubt whether they will use the basic skills when they enter the social. It reminds me of the importance of learning basic skills while most students reluctantly spend much more time obtaining basic knowledge. As it is,basic skills are significant in that we can not only improve our knowledge but also broaden our horizon.To be specific,only when we acquire certain basic skills can we learn advanced skills better,and it will ensure us to be more competitive in our career.Furthermore,the more basic skills we receive,the better we can handle the problems and stresses that confronted in our life. To sum up,basic skills are worth learning,after all,basic skills are the key to success.